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lunesque ([personal profile] lunesque) wrote2004-12-19 01:25 pm
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Our Goodbye -- A Poem

This was our goodbye:
my hands wrapped around a mug of chai,
the telephone so silent it screamed.
My heart ached with a cold
that never seemed to thaw.

This was our goodbye:
the way laughter rang false from your throat;
bitter and ageless from a diet of lies.
You laughed until your voice broke,
and ran inward at the quiet.

This is our goodbye:
the way your hands felt against my face,
the way I watched you from the top of the stairs.
My hands were hidden by the edges of my sweater;
tears littered my fingers like papercuts.

This is our goodbye:
remembering how you once said you would never go--
now, as the lights go out one by one;
now, as you close the door
and lock my universe behind you as you leave.

[identity profile] pinkferret.livejournal.com 2004-12-25 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I feel like I know you.. you write so similar to myself, or vice versa.. kind of creepy.

When I repost everything I will link you to my site and you can read for yourself... I think you will be slightly amused.