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lunesque ([personal profile] lunesque) wrote2004-02-24 06:21 pm
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Okay. So, [livejournal.com profile] krysis_ wrote me. moriavis/clearly_unable , and in return, she asked me to slash her with someone, preferably in poetry format.

This is my attempt. Mostly [livejournal.com profile] krysis_/[livejournal.com profile] moriavis with a hint of someone else.



i.

I loved you first in a shy, silent sort of way,
with soft looks and softer touches and the way my voice broke
on the syllables of your name.

I loved the way your heart pounded
its quick tattoo against the shell of my ear,
whispering your secrets in a language I could pretend to understand.
In you there is an ocean, and I--
I am the echo of the waves.

In a slower, more magical time,
I think you would have been my goddess.
[for I follow where you lead.]

ii.

There is infinite room for love and pain
in the small, false confines of the heart;
I know this as one who always tests her boundaries--
and yet everything I am I would give to you.
[only ask, and it shall be]
Sometimes I remember how you kissed me:
you were warm and tasted like nothing
and it was then that I didn't want
because I'd only ever needed.

iii.

You feature in the still-frame portraits of my life,
a mirage of color spilling onto the canvas of my future,
and when I heard her name on your lips
I burned my mouth on a hasty swallow of too-hot coffee.

I whispered don't let me go in my laughter.
You said I was never holding on with your smile.

[identity profile] on-the-cusp.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
oh honey. this is. ... absolutely gorgeous. [wallows quietly in it]

[identity profile] on-the-cusp.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
<3333333333

i want YOU to slash us! :P

[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
OH! OK! <333333

so I shall.

Angst? Fluff? Poem? Story?

[identity profile] on-the-cusp.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
no angst. if you break my heart i'll kill you. and i die a thousand deaths over your poetry, you know this.

[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
okay.

fluffy.
us.
poetry. ^^;;

[identity profile] on-the-cusp.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
[loves you madly] i will write you poem upon poem upon poem by blaise.
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[personal profile] saekhwa 2004-02-24 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Although, *big happy please because you love me eyes* if I write you/Amalin, can I have me/Kasi?

In a poem?

*loves*

[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*laughs* of course. oh. already have an idea. <3
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[personal profile] saekhwa 2004-02-24 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

*jumps up and down*

MAD :hearts: to you, darling.
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[personal profile] saekhwa 2004-02-24 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*breaks*

*dies*

ohmygoodnessiloveyoubecauseyouarejustthatbloodyamazing.

Oh, this hurts in so many ways, and it's so. . . us, and it's lovely, and *sniffles*

I ache, darling. I ache, and thank you so much. This is almost too much, but still, you leave me wanting so much more.

*glomps*

Oh, and I think next I shall write you/Amalin when ever I should have the bloody time.

[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. <3
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[personal profile] saekhwa 2004-02-24 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Not liked, LOVED. L-O-V-E.

*shakes you and hugs you and glomps you and molests you*

I should totally be thanking you because you're leaving me all madly incoherent and loving you and thank you, thank you.

*relishes and worships*

[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2004-02-24 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
<33333333333333333333333333333333333

You're much too sweet. ^_^
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[personal profile] saekhwa 2004-02-25 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
*giggles*

I'm insane and a dork, but sweet is nice.

*huggles*

Oh! And I've decided finally that I'm going to re-apply to [livejournal.com profile] lostgeneration, so help me find poems to submit to them.

[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2004-02-25 10:18 am (UTC)(link)
er!!! I don't know!! :P