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lunesque ([personal profile] lunesque) wrote2003-03-18 01:49 pm

Original drabble thing



You say I’m beautiful, a priceless jewel among so much muted gravel. You are comprised of roses and soft candlelight; your breath is a silken caress against my skin, and your hands revere me as they hold me close.

I taste someone else on your lips, and the tears burning hot on my cheeks are the only proof that I actually give a damn.

~*~*~*~

“Would you miss me if I were gone?” Your arms are a prison around my waist and your voice is an echo on the breeze, softer than rain, crashing into me with the force of ocean waves against rocks.

I find myself wondering why you’re still here.

~*~*~*~

“Love is blind,” You tell me. Your eyes are blazing reflections of the stars in the darkness. Your body presses me down against the earth, stealing my breath with silent insistence. Your mouth is a brand against my throat as your fingers tangle painfully in my hair.

I can’t help but wonder if you even see me.

~*~*~*~

You say I’m cold.

I say I’m simply waiting for someone who will keep me warm.

~*~*~*~

You ask me what it would feel like to die, as your hands fall away from me and leave me alone and shivering in the aftermath of our dream.

I ask: Aren’t we dead already?

[identity profile] ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com 2003-03-28 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
I taste someone else on your lips, and the tears burning hot on my cheeks are the only proof that I actually give a damn.

You say I’m cold.

I say I’m simply waiting for someone who will keep me warm.


*aches* that was... that was beautiful and raw and just... so so aching love. *holds it close*

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[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2003-03-28 10:29 am (UTC)(link)
*schnoogles you*

Thank you, since you actually got to hear a lot of it before I squished it all together. ^^ Your style is melting on to me. ^^

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[identity profile] ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com 2003-03-29 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
*relieved sigh*