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lunesque ([personal profile] lunesque) wrote2002-10-03 05:27 pm
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Okay, yeah, I was pathetic...I wrote a side story to Defile.... So here it is..dedicated to Regret and Cai again...



Why am I always watching you? Is that what you wanted to know when you dragged me in here?

You stare at me with jade eyes…

Righteous, courageous…

Are you trying to confront me?

My, my… you are indeed a grand Gryffindor--you inherited more than your share of the stupidity as well as the bravery…

So what if I watch you? I have to know my enemies and all that…

Keep your friends close, your enemies closer…

I suppose I understand. After all, your friends aren’t the target of my regard. Why? It should be obvious, really--I don’t fancy being struck blind or turned to stone.

Oh, you think I want something from you, is that it? Everyone has to want something from you--Great God Potter who sits upon his pedestal and gifts everyone with their most fervent desires.

Are you angry now? No one’s dared to challenge you before, have they?

No one’s dared to touch you…

Shove you…

Hurt you…

Do you want this?

Violent gold scarlet your skin your taste your sounds and lips and tongue and skin and hot and wet and tight inside so tight you so good gods don’t let this end never ever ever want more hate you want you hurt you bleed you damn you…

...desecrate you...

...

Why am I leaving?

It’s over...

You stare at me, flushed skin, jaded eyes, hot against the cold stone of the wall...

And I thought I was the one who watched.

I see it in your eyes--you think that there is more to this…

More because I stroked you…

Fucked you...

...you want more...

And I don’t want you.

Are those tears?

I’m in your blood, a poison, and you can’t stand it…

You want to fight it, but you’re already mine…

My toy...

Dirty broken thing…

…you are so pretty…

--The End--

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[personal profile] scheherezhad 2002-10-03 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeeeeeeee! Draco-y goodness... ::glomps::

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[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2002-10-03 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Did you like? *loves Sche*

[identity profile] ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com 2002-10-03 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
::screams and rages and cries and beats mori about the ears::

ACKACKACK!!

i could KILL you!!

i was like oh oh oh!! through the whole thing, but it was okay, until that last. fucking. LINE!!

you can't end something like this with someone like that!!

it gives wannabe losers like me HOPE!!

[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2002-10-03 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
As I told you before, love--Draco broke his toy... And don't kill me, or you won't get any more of VPR or LW... And about that last line--I offered to take it out, but you spazzed even worse. :) *loves* I'm glad you liked (?) it...

[identity profile] ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com 2002-10-03 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
OF COURSE I LIKED IT YOU CUNT!!!

and i don't actually plan on killing you... just flogging you a little!

::wicked dominatrix!grin::

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[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2002-10-04 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
ooooh, well, in that case. *wicked grins* Take me, I'm yours.

[identity profile] ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com 2002-10-04 10:42 am (UTC)(link)
aw, babes ::thwaps riding crop on hand:: you say the *nicest* things!!

[identity profile] ishuca.livejournal.com 2002-10-04 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
:chokes:

finally got to reading this and defile... wow.

just- wow. yes.

i'm going to go be speechless for a while.

:adores mori:

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[identity profile] moriavis.livejournal.com 2002-10-04 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes and dies* I'm glad you liked! I've missed getting commments from you! *huggles ish*

[identity profile] ishuca.livejournal.com 2002-10-04 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
:sniffs:

i've missed having the time to read...

rl is sucking up all of my time, at some point i'm going to have to go back and wade through old posts! argh.

but if they're as wonderful as this, i'm looking forward to it.

[identity profile] brightflashes.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
NICE!