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[lunesque]

This is an odd little ficlet...it's made me decide that I absolutely should not write anything 15 minutes before midnight... Let's see, I'll dedicate this to Cai and Regret, because they always give me presents, and maybe it'll convince them to give me more... :) (Aren't I a selfish little creature? :D) It's style is a bit different than what I'm used to writing...I think it shows...*shrugs*



Why are you always watching me?

Oh? You're not?

You're lying...

The placid argent that you call your eyes follows me everywhere, catalogues my every move...

Constantly burning into me...

A mirror...

Reflecting my face back at me...

Raven hair and nephrite eyes a distorted replica of pure silvery frost...

Do you want me? Hate me? Need me?

Why are you laughing? Do you think I’m as clueless as everyone thinks I am?

Do you think that I’m really some sort of savior that is so naïve he believes the world is rose colored and perfect?

Everyone wants something from me, even you. The question is--what?

What are you…?

Oh, gods…

Hot--searing and wet and your hands and your tongue and your teeth and oh gods please don’t stop no one’s ever wanted this and oh god I’ll give you everything just don’t don’t stop so sweet salty need this pulsing filling me flesh and pain and red and lust and ecstasy your body against mine make me dirty impure perfect--

…shatter me…

Where are you going…?

You wanted to defile me, leave me behind…?

…Did you know I wanted it too…?

Don’t think this is over.

I can’t let this be over.

Walk away as if this hasn’t happened, as if you weren’t a part of me, as if our hate hasn’t transformed into something more.

I’m going to break you, Draco Malfoy.

I have to.

Before you have the opportunity to break me.

--The End--


Hmmm....*wrinkles nose*

Comments

[ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com]

::wets self::

::opens and closes and opens and closes and opens and closes mouth::

i... have no words but wow...

and i guess this means i have to post the two little snippets i wrote you today, huh?

i can't keep them for myself anymore...

::sighs::

i hate you.

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[moriavis.livejournal.com]

*blinks* Does that mean you liked it? :)

[ex-dark-soul916.livejournal.com]

CHRIST NO!!

that means i loved it!

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[moriavis.livejournal.com]

*loves*

[scheherezhad]

Wheeee! More fic to go on the site. I'm just going to start pirating things off your journal and sticking them up on the site. Ha.

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[moriavis.livejournal.com]

eep! I'll get a summary for this thing and cold today, I promise!...Do you really LIKE this thing? Cause Dray's making me write a side story... Leslie, why do I do character pieces in twos? *sniffle*

[evanjeline.livejournal.com]

Mori, I love it.
The rough feel you gave it is astounding. It feels gritty and impure.
IT IS PERFECT.
The piece itself portrays the words and the words portray the piece.
EVERYTHING FITS.
Don't you even try to say that this isn't good. It's Great.
I think the fact that this is the first time you have written anything like this helps.
It adds a course lust to the piece. Almost a staggered thought.
Instantly LOVES.
Write more like this.
write, Write, WRITE.

LUV Zar ( who has not yet been put on your friends list *pouts*)

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[moriavis.livejournal.com]

oops. :) lol I'll put you on it right now. *blushes and hides* Does it help to say Draco wants his say in it all?

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[evanjeline.livejournal.com]

Oh, just continue to read things ok.
Luv U

*looks like fish*

[cblm.livejournal.com]

I think the title pretty much says it all.

*laughs*

Wow.

*big grin*

I got dedicated to...

hehe

This makes me happy.

And I *really* liked the story.

It was *really* good...

Will there be more, or do you just want it to be a stand alone?

*loves*
Cai

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[moriavis.livejournal.com]

Well, there's a Draco POV that I've just written that goes with it... stupid pop-up-at-the-last-minute lines... Did you really like it? I wasn't that sure...it's a big jump from what I'm used to..